Hey, there guys!
Hope you all are having a great time this holiday season. 😀 It’s a bit gloomy down here. It seems like one of those days when you don’t want to do anything and bored to death of doing nothing.
Anyway, while I figure out what to do next, I’d like you to read the first poem written by me. As I’ve already told you that I started writing last year only, this was my very first poem.. 🙂 Do send me your thoughts about it. 🙂
कभी- कभी सोचती हूँ ,
के क्यूँ नहीं भूल पाती मैं कुछ चीज़े,
याद आती है सब,
जब सोना चाहूँ मैं आँखें मींदे..
कभी – कभी सोचती हूँ,
कुछ ऐसा कर जाऊँ,
न रहे शिकायत किसीको,
इतनी मैं संवर जाऊँ..
पर ये शिकायतें,
नहीं लगता जाएंगी मुझे,
परेशान सी रहती हूँ,
क्या पता, कब राहत आएगी मुझे..
इन शिकायतों को दूर करते- करते,
दिन ढल जाएगा,
फिर शाम होते ही,
मेरी सोच में शिकायतों का पिटारा शोर मचाएगा।
PS: New year’s approaching fast, we’re planning on launching something new in 2017. Stay tuned! It is going to be really exciting! 😀
I would say WONDERFUL for a beginner. Congrats.
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Thank you very much! 😀
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Beautiful poem.. 👌🏼
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Thank you! 😀
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Welcome 😁
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Amazing poem with nice words
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Thank you! 😀
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Wow wonderfully written. 👌💞
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Thank you! 😀
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Very nice poem. The last line is beautiful ‘मेरी सोच में शिकायतों का पिटारा शोर मचाएगा’
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Thank you! 🙂
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